trešdiena, 2010. gada 1. decembris

Chapter I-short story/soup-

I stand and watch as she stares away into space
I catch a glimpse of her face
I think the land fades away

Oh no what have I done
I want to run
i cant stand this feeling

My heart is exploding
My eyes are closing
My soul is exposing

Oh no what have I done
I want to run
I cant stand this feeling

It was just a kiss
That i didn't miss

Land fading away
Lips landing on hers
hands on hips

Oh no what have I done
I want to run
I cant stand this feeling

My heart is exploding
My eyes are closing
My soul is exposing

There is no space between
we stare face to face

8 komentāri:

  1. Tu taču pats to nerakstīji? Vai arī rakstīji?

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  2. a ka tu doma? manliekas ka es :D bet vai tik?

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  3. dude loves everywhere :D so f.u :P and I asked criticism about the context style :D

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  4. I'm sure this has a background story to it. Every writer has some sort of influence/inspiration to pen down each individual piece of writing. Care to share? I'm interested.

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  5. well well, a background story you say? This particular writings background is simple yet complex, so I actually don't know from where do I start? This writing is a mix of random feeling and thoughts I had when I remembered a particular event of my life that occurred some while ago. I could say that this Lil piece of writing is the emotions I had during this event... But if not digging down deep I could say on moment mother muse visited me and I sat down and started writing this and until I was done i couldn't think straight...

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  6. Very interesting. I can relate, I get those moments also. Well done, I'm following.

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